Bursts of brilliant stars,
Stretching, kicking like dancers,
Love to be dazzlers,
Warming the observers’ hearts
While winter’s greaving departs.
These miniature iris’s were a beautiful surprise: inspiration for my Tanka poem above. I hope you enjoy it. I don’t always use a specific poetic form, so I hope it has worked!
Wonderful bursts of colour and poem LG.. Spring here feels a long way off as yet.. So this post brought me Sunshine on another rainy day here. π
Thanks Sue. I’m glad my poem has brought you sunshine. It makes such a difference when it shines! I have more energy! I hope the weather brightens up for you. Lol.Hugsxxx
π sunshine and showers seem the routine these past few days x
Beautiful image and tanka poem, I could just about feel as though I was the one viewing those flowers in real life.
Thank you for your positive feedback Kiwinana. I glad you jad that feeling.
It has worked for me. Captures the essence of these lovely flowers.
Thanks for your positive feedback. They are such a joy to see!
Always makes me smile, nice words..
Thank you.
I feel your words were absolutely perfect for the image you chose. Donβt those flowers look like bursting stars. Well done.
Thank you for your encouragement LA. I really appreciate your comment!ππ
My pleasure