Bursts of brilliant stars

Bursts of brilliant stars,

Stretching, kicking like dancers,

Love to be dazzlers,

Warming the observers’ hearts

While winter’s greaving departs.

These miniature iris’s were a beautiful surprise: inspiration for my Tanka poem above. I hope you enjoy it. I don’t always use a specific poetic form, so I hope it has worked!

12 thoughts on “Bursts of brilliant stars

  1. Wonderful bursts of colour and poem LG.. Spring here feels a long way off as yet.. So this post brought me Sunshine on another rainy day here. πŸ™‚

  2. Beautiful image and tanka poem, I could just about feel as though I was the one viewing those flowers in real life.

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